Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A group of people contend that it is better for authorities to invest

on

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rail

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the rail

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network rather

that

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than

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other modes of transport.

Although

, I believe that

this

statement can be logical,

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but

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I think governments should

also

have some plans to progress the

roads

and highways. On the one hand, spending a part of financial resources on

roads

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infrastructure

have

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a lot of benefits.

Firstly

,

expanding

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the road networks and highways people can use their own cars for short and long journeys.

Therefore

, not only individuals will have their own privacy but

also

they will

able

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to travel to different sites and

cities

without spending more time and costs.

In addition

, by developing the urban and rural

roads

different parts of

industry

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the industry

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will flourish faster.

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, a farmer who

cultivate

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cultivates

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some agricultural products he/her can deliver its products to the consumer as soon as possible.

On the other hand

, allocating more funds

on

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rail networks is useful for any country for a number

reasons

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.

To begin

with, a lot of accidents occur on

roads

yearly because of using cars.

However

, travel by train has high safety and

hence

developing

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of railways

lead

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to an incredible

reducing

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in

death

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toll and casualties.

Furthermore

, in recent decades air pollution has been an important issue in large

cities

. Anyway, it is clearly known that many

of

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cities

try to solve

this

problem by urban train development.

To sum up

,

while

spending money resources on subways and trains significantly

diminish

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diminishes

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road casualties and contamination of

cities

, in my

opinion

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investment

on

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road networks can be beneficial.