Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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A group of people contend that it is better for authorities to invest
on
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rail
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the rail
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network rather
that
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than
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other modes of transport.
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, I believe that
this
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statement can be logical,
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but
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I think governments should
also
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have some plans to progress the
roads
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and highways. On the one hand, spending a part of financial resources on
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roads
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road
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infrastructure
have
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a lot of benefits.
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,
expanding
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the road networks and highways people can use their own cars for short and long journeys.
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, not only individuals will have their own privacy but
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they will
able
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to travel to different sites and
cities
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without spending more time and costs.
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, by developing the urban and rural
roads
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different parts of
industry
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the industry
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will flourish faster.
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, a farmer who
cultivate
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cultivates
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some agricultural products he/her can deliver its products to the consumer as soon as possible.
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, allocating more funds
on
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rail networks is useful for any country for a number
reasons
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of reasons
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.
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with, a lot of accidents occur on
roads
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yearly because of using cars.
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, travel by train has high safety and
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developing
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development
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of railways
lead
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to an incredible
reducing
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in
death
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the death
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toll and casualties.
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, in recent decades air pollution has been an important issue in large
cities
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. Anyway, it is clearly known that many
of
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cities
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try to solve
this
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problem by urban train development.
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,
while
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spending money resources on subways and trains significantly
diminish
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diminishes
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road casualties and contamination of
cities
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, in my
opinion
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investment
on
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road networks can be beneficial.
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  • Regional development
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  • Feasibility
  • Flexibility
  • Rural areas
  • Integration
  • Sustainable
  • Efficiency
  • Infrastructure
  • Commuters
  • Public expenditure
  • Autonomous vehicles
  • Long-term investment
  • Accessibility
  • Connectivity
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