The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar graph illustrates the regular consumption and buying of
coffee
and tea by Australian residents from five different Use synonyms
cities
in the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks.
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Overall
, it is obvious that the highest rate for going to Linking Words
cafes
to drink Use synonyms
coffee
or tea was for Melbourne and Hobart citizensUse synonyms
Rephrase
apply
similarly
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Additionally
, it has been reported from all these Linking Words
cities
that instant Use synonyms
coffee
was the first chosen drink among residents of these Use synonyms
cities
.
Regarding going to Use synonyms
cafes
, more than 60% of the population of Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney went to Use synonyms
cafes
in the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks. Linking Words
Moreover
, Linking Words
while
over a half of Brisban citizens went to Linking Words
cafes
in the Use synonyms
last
4 weeks, in Adelaide only less than a half did the same.
Focusing on the consumption of Linking Words
coffee
, around 53% bought fresh and less than two-fifths bought instant Use synonyms
coffee
in Hobart, Use synonyms
while
less than 52% of other Linking Words
cities
in Australia chose to buy fresh Use synonyms
coffee
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the gap between buying instant Linking Words
coffee
Use synonyms
instead
of its alternative in Adelaide and Brisban was huge with nearly 14% and 15% respectively.Linking Words
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