The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparisions where relevent.

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The given diagrams show the process for recycling

plastic

bottles.

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From

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overall

view, it can be seen that some steps to

plastic

bottles are recycling. All people throw the

plastic

wastage

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waste

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like bottle and covers which is fully

madeup

Correct your spelling

made up

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plastic

items.They

puted

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put

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recycling

Correct article usage

a recycling

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tank

that is

placed by

street

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the street

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cornor

Correct your spelling

corner

.After some days recycling truck will come and take all

wastage

Correct article usage

the wastage

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product

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products

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and put

inside

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them inside

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.It will go to

recycling

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a recycling

the recycling

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center,In that center

they

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there

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will be

seprating

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separate

object

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objects

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with the help of

similiar

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similar

shapes or

character

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characters

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Those

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This

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waste

are

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compressing

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compressed

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into blocks and it will be

crushing

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crushed

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and

washing

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washed

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Correct article usage

The next

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steps

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step

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is producing

plastic

pellets

ones

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once

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it's go

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it's going

it's gone

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inside the machine, after that it will be heating pellets to form raw materials.

This type

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These types

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of raw materials are ready to

producing

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produce

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some

cloths

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clothes

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or any other things

such

pencil

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pencils

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,paper or bags.So

these

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this

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are

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exactly

happening

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what happening

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plastic

bottles or items are

recycling

Wrong verb form

recycled

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.After

that

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,that

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It will

come

Verb problem

apply

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be used

one

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
37Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

157 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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task 2: More and more people today are spending large amounts of money on their complexions in order to look younger. Why do people want to look younger? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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