The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature,and make comparisions where relevent.

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The given diagrams show the process for recycling

plastic

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bottles.

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From

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overall

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view, it can be seen that some steps to

plastic

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bottles are recycling. All people throw the

plastic

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wastage

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waste

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like bottle and covers which is fully

madeup

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made up

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plastic

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items.They

puted

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put

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recycling

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a recycling

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tank

that is

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placed by

street

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the street

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cornor

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corner

.After some days recycling truck will come and take all

wastage

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the wastage

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product

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products

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and put

inside

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them inside

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.It will go to

recycling

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a recycling

the recycling

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center,In that center

they

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there

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will be

seprating

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separate

object

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objects

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with the help of

similiar

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similar

shapes or

character

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characters

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Those

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This

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waste

are

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compressing

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compressed

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into blocks and it will be

crushing

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crushed

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and

washing

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washed

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The next

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steps

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step

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is producing

plastic

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pellets

ones

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once

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it's go

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it's going

it's gone

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inside the machine, after that it will be heating pellets to form raw materials.

Linking Words

This type

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These types

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of raw materials are ready to

producing

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produce

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some

cloths

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clothes

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or any other things

such

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pencil

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pencils

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,paper or bags.So

these

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this

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are

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exactly

happening

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what happening

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plastic

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bottles or items are

recycling

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recycled

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.After

that

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,that

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It will

come

Verb problem

apply

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be used

one

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apply

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
37
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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