Two charts show the use of broadband connections in several developed countries.
The presented table illustrates the development in broadband connection usage in 5 different
countries
and the given bar graph demonstrates the number of connections
per 1000 individuals before and after the changes.
Overall
, The USA and South Korea predominate the other 3 countries
however
, America took the first
place after the changes. Moreover
, Britain which had the lowest number of connections
at first
, experienced the most change among these countries
and finished above Switzerland
and Germany
.
At first
, South Korea and The USA were the first
and second countries
in terms of the most connections
with 122 and 93. After the changes, The USA skyrocketed to 251.1 by a 170% increase while
South Korea experienced the lowest percentage of change with 20% and lost its place to America.
Switzerland
in the third place, noticed a huge gap with the Americans and Koreans with just 3.6 connections
per 1000 people and Germany
and Britain were in the next places with 3.4 and 3.3 respectively. Although
Britain had the least connections
at first
, they rose 230% which is the highest percentage change and they finished above Switzerland
and Germany
with 10.89. Germany
and Switzerland
grew 80 and 120 percent to 5.616 and 7.92 broadband connections
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