The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The design represents the plot of an airport at present

how

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it will look after reconstruction

the

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upcoming year.

Overall

, it is clear from the plan as it portrays the upgradation of SouthWest Airport from

this

year to next year. There are many development that includes ATMs for money withdrawal, Car hiring facilities, bag drop spots and so on.

In addition

, it consists

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lot of gates ranging between one to eighteen

whereas

now it has only one to eight gates.

Firstly

, now it consists of a small arrivals opening which has a very small pathway and immediately after crossing the

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there

has

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a

passport

control

customs to check the passenger's

passport

.

Moreover

, it includes a walkway at the top consisting of eight gateways. Security

passport

control

should be passed

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before the passengers move to

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the departure

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area after the check-in process

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over. In case any waiting occurs, passengers can have a coffee in

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the cafe

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area which is located opposite

to

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the check-in spot.

Secondly

,

development

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the development

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of

airport

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the airport

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it had

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made

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significant construction which includes spacies arrivals, a car hiring scheme, an ATM for money withdrawal and

cafe

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a cafe

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in front of the

passport

control

customs.

Furthermore

,

instead

of having a walkway sky trains are implemented for comfortness. There are several other gateways

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been included in the plan which has an additional

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ten. Many other facilities like

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the presence

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of shops behind the security

passport

control

and one bag drop section in

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the departures

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departures

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zone for

passenger's

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passenger

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usability.