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Which are the tree main problems for the futur of the world? (poverty, famine, war, unemployment, desease, overpopulation, global warming, shortage of natural resources,...). Develop.

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Our
planet
 is facing big problems
such
 as pollution, global warming, and a shortage of natural
resources
. Problems that have occurred because of people's actions.
Firstly
, I believe that we are fond of major global changes because of our weakness in evaluating our actions.
Secondly
, people all over the world, for the
last
 decade, destroying the
planet
 by cutting down forests, making big concrete cities, and using unconsciously all natural
resources
. Not only these but many more bad habits bring us to air and water pollution.
This
 summer, we saw huge disaster weather phenomena, all over the
planet
. From Europe to Canada and even some Asian countries. Fires, floods, and wars were everyday news. People leave their homes and lands
in addition
 to being safe from disasters. Did anybody believe 50 years ago that our acts towards the environment, would be our today problems? The answer is probably No. Because even now, we believe that everything man does, is for a better and safer
planet
. We use all natural
resources
 to create "green cities". But we didn't realise that all these
resources
 are not unlimited. As a conclusion, I strongly believe that it is the time when everyone must act. We all must make small steps to help our
planet
 restart. By saving water, and electricity, reducing gas use, planting trees, stopping wars, and using transportation
instead
 of our vehicles. All these and many others can help to make a new start for our
planet
. So, if we want our children to live on a safe green
planet
 and not in a desert or even where not have a chance to live a normal life, now is our chance to challenge all difficulties and give them something to remember us.
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