Some say it is better to have vertical cities with lots of tall buildings rather than horizontal cities with fewer tall buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the sophisticated development throughout the world, architectural enhancement
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can be seen. some of the community believe that striated-up
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are better,
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others believe that they should be parallel.
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, my personal perspective is tall architectural designs are best as they will be the best solution for a plethora of matters
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as overpopulation, unavailability of space etc. Throughout
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,essay I hope to illustrate the reasons for my own opinion. On one hand, no one can predict climate changes and disasters happen in the future. Unless there is a flood or Tsunami situation, single-store parallel
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are the most secure building type as the building able to bear the weight properly.
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type of simple structure can absorb the shocks and prove the secure ability again. Even though, overpopulation is a reason for a set of common problems which we can experience not only in a single country
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in the entire world.
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that, it is very difficult to find a suitable place to live with basic sanitary and other requirements. Land space is very limited and people have to manage that and somehow they should be able to overcome
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matter. Introducing apartments with enough facilities in skyscrapers
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can solve
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matter easily. Not only that food requirements are
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popping up parallel with the population and governments will able to allocate extra hectares for cultivation purposes If they
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are able to prepare multi-purpose high
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as apartments, office sectors etc.,
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cities will be fully covered with fewer tall
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, without having other places
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as parks, and grounds.
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, there's a mono-floor building in the Colombo area and it covers more than 30
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per cent
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and a children's park with a picture view. It had added more value to the area and they have started the same functions in that building, just as previously.
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, skyscrapers are the most preferred solution for the lack of land for food cultivation and to live
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. I believe that if possible tall building structures have with positive impact on society and it's better to manage cities with high-range
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