Some say it is better to have vertical cities with lots of tall buildings rather than horizontal cities with fewer tall buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the sophisticated development throughout the world, architectural enhancement
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also can
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be seen.
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of the community believe that striated-up
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are better,
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others believe that they should be parallel.
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, my personal perspective is tall architectural designs are best as they will be the best solution for a plethora of matters
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as overpopulation, unavailability of space
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. Throughout
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hope to illustrate the reasons for my own opinion. On one hand, no one can predict
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changes and disasters
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in the future. Unless there is a flood or Tsunami situation, single-store parallel
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are the most secure building type as the building
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is able
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to bear the weight properly.
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type of simple structure can absorb the shocks and prove
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secure ability again. Even though
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overpopulation is a reason for a set of common problems which we can experience not only in a single country, but
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in the entire world.
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that, it is very difficult to find a suitable place to live with basic sanitary and other requirements. Land space is very limited
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people have to manage that
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somehow they should be able to overcome
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matter. Introducing apartments with enough facilities in skyscrapers
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can solve
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matter easily. Not only that food requirements
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popping up parallel with the population
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governments will able to allocate extra hectares for cultivation purposes If they
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are able to prepare multi-purpose high
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as apartments, office sectors
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,
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otherwise
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cities will be fully covered with fewer tall
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, without having other places
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as parks
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and grounds.
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, there's a mono-floor building in the Colombo area and it covers more than 30
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of the land. But after reconstruction,
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there are now
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five stored
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and a children's park with a picture view. It had added more value to the area
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they have started the same functions in that building, just as previously.
To conclude
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, skyscrapers are the most preferred solution for the lack of land for food cultivation and to live
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apply
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also
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. I believe that if
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possible,
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tall building structures have with positive impact on society
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it's better to manage cities with
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high-rise
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buildings
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planning
Plan your essay first. State your view clearly at the start, then give three main reasons.
coherence
Use simple linking words to show how ideas go, like first, also, but, so.
grammar
Keep sentences short. Check spelling and make small fixes to grammar.
idea
You give a clear view on the topic.
example
You try to use an example from real life (Colombo).
structure
You try to explain why tall buildings may help with space and health.
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