The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.
The three-line chart illustrates the numerical details of Australian import and export with China,
Japan
, and the USA in 2004-2009. The figures are presented in Billions.
Overall
, it can be seen that
Australia
's trade with China significantly increased
while
with
Japan
and the USA, imports got similar trends.
However
, the values of exports with these two nations fluctuated in a given period of the years. It can be noticed that
Australia
sold over 10
billion
worth of products and services to China in 2004, which dramatically increased over the next five years, and reached approximately 35
billion
in 2009.
On the other hand
,
Japan
bought just over 20
billion
of products from
Australia
in 2009, and that figure climbed to 28
billion
in 2005, between 2006-2007 there was no noticeable improvement,
whereas
from 2007-2009 there was a flute, in 2008 it hit at around 42
billion
and numbers dramatically decreased to 30
billion
.
On the other hand
, exports to America presented a similar trend during the given period and that started at marginally above 9
billion
and until 2008 there was no noticeable movement
nevertheless
, the
last
12 months export figures went up slightly. In terms of trading with
Japan
and the USA, from 2004 to 2007
Australia
's purchase ability with the Japanese market remained unchanged the amount around 19
billion
, and in 2008 slightly over 20
billion
, and
then
a drop in 2009. Despite that numerical variation of imports in America with figure out with similar movements the value started at 21
billion
and declined to 19
billion
in the final year.
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  • fluctuate
  • spike
  • decline
  • trend
  • trade deficit
  • trade surplus
  • commodity prices
  • economic policy
  • international relations
  • exports
  • imports
  • year-on-year
  • notable changes
  • trade volume
  • economic factors
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