The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented table and bar chart provide details about foreign
students
in English-speaking countries
from 2004 to 2012. The four countries
are the USA, UK, Australia
and Canada.
Overall
, the USA has the highest number
of learners while
Canada ranks the least. Both the UK and Australia
have a close count for the number
of students
studying abroad and also
have increased in percentage of enrolees in both years.
There is an increasing trend in the number
of students
in the four countries
. The USA started at 170 in 2004 and accumulated to nearly 250 after 8 years. It also
shows that the number
of learners in the UK has almost similar data to that of Australia
, with roughly 190 to 200 students
in 2012 and 130 students
in 2004.
On the table, after making the survey in 2004, Australia
kept being the most famous place to study with 24% above the other countries
. The US remained at exactly 2% between 2004 and 2012 while
all countries
increased in rates by 2% to 5% each.Submitted by Andrea Barreto on
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