The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart and table show information about students from abroad studying in four English-speaking countries in 2004 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented table and bar chart provide details about foreign
students
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in English-speaking
countries
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from 2004 to 2012. The four
countries
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are the USA, UK,
Australia
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and Canada.
Overall
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, the USA has the highest
number
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of learners
while
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Canada ranks the least. Both the UK and
Australia
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have a close count for the
number
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of
students
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studying abroad and
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have increased in percentage of enrolees in both years. There is an increasing trend in the
number
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of
students
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in the four
countries
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. The USA started at 170 in 2004 and accumulated to nearly 250 after 8 years. It
also
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shows that the
number
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of learners in the UK has almost similar data to that of
Australia
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, with roughly 190 to 200
students
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in 2012 and 130
students
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in 2004. On the table, after making the survey in 2004,
Australia
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kept being the most famous place to study with 24% above the other
countries
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. The US remained at exactly 2% between 2004 and 2012
while
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all
countries
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increased in rates by 2% to 5% each.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, countries, australia, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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