The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented diagram illustrates the development of the plan for the Central Library floor from 20 years ago and now.
Overall
, usage of all the sections has changed and a new
room
for the cafe has been built on the
right
side of the entrance.
According to
the diagram, at the top
right
of the floor, a
room
which was designed for children's books, now specified for lectures and children's
room
with improving some facilities like storytelling events and 2 sofas moved to the top left
room
which used to be for storing CD's, videos and computer games. The bottom left
room
which was allocated to read newspapers and magazines, has now been replaced by a computer
room
.
Also
, a cafe was constructed in the bottom
right
of the floor
instead
of the enquiry desk. In the corridors, adult fiction books moved from the left to the
right
and several self-service machines were provided next to them. tables and chairs are removed from the centre and reference books have been placed on the
right
side of the corridor.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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