Some people believe that all children should have a pet or an animal to look after. Other people disagree, however, saying that this depends on a child’s circumstances. Consider these opposing views, and give your own opinion.

It is often said that for

children

it is excellent to care

animals

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.

However

,

this

is a debatable topic that some people disagree.

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essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.

One

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the one hand, those who support the idea of caring

pets

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or

animals

in every house or flat by means of

children

point to the increase of

children

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activity in

such

situations.

For example

, if a child

allocate

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his or her time to play with a dog, it leads to more walking and running.

Furthermore

, it is

also

true that

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looking after an animal during childhood causes to increasing the knowledge of the child about

animals

and

also

they learn about suitable

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behave

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with them in their future life.

Finally

, it seems that

animals

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animal

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caring

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care

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in

the

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childhood can be helpful for having more discipline.

For example

,

children

have to set some exact time for feeding to pets and playing with them.

By contrast

, opponents of

this

view point out that all of the homes do not have enough space for pets and

animals

.

In addition

, the costs of caring

animals

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do not allow all levels of

the

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society to have one.

For example

, in terms of medical care, a dog needs an enormous amount of money for vaccination and special drugs

in

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different ages against sicknesses. It seems advisable that looking after

animals

depends on some essential factors like home size and affordability for supporting them rather than just thinking about

children

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interests.