The key to reducing crime is to have more police patrolling the streets.’ How far do you support this proposal? What other ways of reducing crime may be effective?

With the development of
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and society,people are becoming more and more concerned about the rising
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of police patrolling the streets is
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effective solution to decrease criminal behaviour.Personally,
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disagree
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opinion and think education and
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policy are the therapies to social disease---
crime
. At first,
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can play a great role in two aspects,which can divided into school and
prison
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,
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and
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lecture
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and other forms of activity,which let
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realize that
crime
can cause serious destruction to
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families
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and society.It is beneficial that
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avoid
crime
from
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aspect.For
prison
,the authorities can use
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method to state that the bad consequence
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by
crime
.At the same time,some experts believe that secondary
crime
occupies the main part of the
crime
,so
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can put forward some skill training lessons for
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prisoners
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of
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find
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a decent job after they back to
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society.
Secondly
,the
government
should introduce some relevant
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to limit behaviour related to
crime
.
For instance
,violence and pornography.Nowadays,people can easily browse these
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without limitation for age.
As a result
,the
government
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the website.
Besides
,
government
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can improve the efficiency of existing police rather than increase their numbers,
for instance
by better training in computer-based
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misdeeds
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.
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would generate improved rates of detection of crimes and more efficient use of the vast amount of technology available. Another viable option would be to increase penalties for criminals, which would have the benefit of deterring them from committing
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at all. Both these alternatives would be comparatively cheap
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and would address the root of the problem rather than seeking to suppress the symptoms.
Overall
, we have seen that increased patrols are of limited effectiveness because they are superficial in nature. Educate for
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and
prison
,better training and stronger sentencing would appear to be far more robust alternatives these days.
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