The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate various motives for employees to choose whether cycling or driving as a way of commuting to work. 30% of the people surveyed preferred bicycles as a method of travelling to their workplace to boost physical health and fitness. Another 30% cited the effects of pollution produced by cars when driven as opposed to cycling which have less impact on the environment.
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, the advantages of using bikes were highlighted by commuters with 28% mentioning the ease of finding a spot to park and its cost efficiency. The
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12% were concerned about congestion choosing the two-wheeler as their preferred way of reaching their offices on time. The comfort of driving cars represented 40% of the workers, followed by 21% opting for it
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the relatively far distance that they have to cover daily going to their offices. The speed and the spacious body to carry stuff to work were another two reasons standing both equally at 14%.
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, 11% of the people interviewed thought that cars are a safer mode of commuting on roads.
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