The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table illustrates the information about how underground railway is being constructed in six different cities.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen in this
chart that London was the oldest city to date opening and also
the longest kilometers
of route, Change the spelling
kilometres
while
Tokyo has the most passengers per year.
The first subway within that cities
went to London, which stood at 1863, it was totally different from other cities that had been built for more than 1900. Fix the agreement mistake
city
Besides
that, London also
has the longest speeds
of the line which contributed to 394 long. Fix the agreement mistake
speed
However
, Los Angeles is the newest one who have
been constructed in the 20th century.
Tokyo and Paris have the highest Change the verb form
has
participants
which constituted Correct quantifier usage
number of participants
at
more than a thousand. Kyoto and Los Angeles have the shortest journey of route which accounted for 11 and 28 respectively. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, they also
have the least of total visitors which made up just under a half.Submitted by aulia2207nadila on
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