The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.
The line
chart
compares the amount of time migrants to the UK wanted to stay over an 8 year
period. Add a hyphen
8-year
Moreoever
, the pie Correct your spelling
Moreover
chart
illustrates why people
decided to immigrate in the year of
2008.
In the line Change preposition
apply
chart
, we can see although
the number of people
who intended to stay for less than two years was stable for the first two years, it rose and became the most
favourite option for immigrants. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Also
in the pie chart
, work was stated as the main reason for immigration.
In the year 2000, people
who migrated for a shorter period of time had the same figure as the long term
migrants; both roughly at 150 Add a hyphen
long-term
thousand
people
, while
a little over 50 thousand
people
wanted to stay between 2 to 4 years. Short term
immigrants began to increase in 2001 and rose to almost 250 Add a hyphen
Short-term
thousand
people
in 2004 and stayed at the same figure since then
. However
, the number of people
in the other two groups almost did not change, mid term
migrants' figure fluctuated and Add a hyphen
mid-term
finally
, increased to 100 thousand
people
in 2008.
In the second chart
, it is shown that work and studying combined for merely 70 percent
of the reasons for immigration in 2008; 38 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
of which is accounted by work to be Change the spelling
per cent
percise
. Correct your spelling
precise
People
who wanted to join their family were the third most prevalent with 16 percent
Change the spelling
per cent
while
the remaining 14 precent
was split up between Correct your spelling
per cent
people
who chose other reasons or, did not want to answer this
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