An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays
poeple
have a tendency to become more flawless Correct your spelling
people
with
doing Change preposition
by
surgery
and using cosmetic
in order to satisfy themselves to keep Fix the agreement mistake
cosmetics
good looking
. I Add a hyphen
good-looking
personaly
think Correct your spelling
personally
this
is a negative development since it
costly and sometimes could be Add a verb
isit
wasit
harmfull
.
The main reason people end up in beauty Correct your spelling
harmful
clinic
and having Fix the agreement mistake
clinics
surgery
mostly because
they do not feel Correct word choice
that
confidence
with their self. Replace the word
confident
As a
result
they find information and end up in Add a comma
,result
surgery
room even Add an article
the surgery
they
have to pay Correct word choice
though they
much
money. Correct quantifier usage
apply
For instance
, well known
American actress Madonna is the one who always had Add a hyphen
well-known
a
Remove the article
apply
surgery
because she felt not confidence
Replace the word
confident
in
stage. Change preposition
on
Thus
, she also
suffer
with negative Wrong verb form
suffered
effect
of the operation affected to her health even Fix the agreement mistake
effects
end
in death.
Wrong verb form
ending
On the other hand
, ordinary people nowadays also
influenced by Add a missing verb
are also
this
trend and consume import
cosmetic Wrong verb form
imported
product
, even Fix the agreement mistake
products
go
overseas to have Wrong verb form
going
operation
. Fix the agreement mistake
operations
This
is because they want to imitate their favourite actor or actress in
TV. Typically they collect all Change preposition
on
information
and Correct article usage
the information
going to
have Verb problem
apply
same
treatment in Add an article
the same
exact
place in order to obtain similar Add an article
the exact
result
. One real example could be seen from the fans of Korean Fix the agreement mistake
results
actress
, Fix the agreement mistake
actresses
usually
they go to Korea just to have Add a comma
,usually
the
Correct article usage
apply
surgery
and buy the cosmetic. Moreover
, they also
spend to
much money since the price is higher.
Replace the word
too
To conclude
, lack of confidence
become
the main reason change their appearance even Change the verb form
becomes
they
have to pay higher than usual. Correct word choice
if they
In Addition
, having self
Add a hyphen
self-confidence
confidence
is beneficial to prevent our selves
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ourselves
getting
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from getting
enganged
in negative things Correct your spelling
engaged
such
as have
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having
palstic
Correct your spelling
plastic
surgery
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