An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays

poeple

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people

have a tendency to become more flawless

with

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by

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doing

surgery

and using

cosmetic

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cosmetics

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in order to satisfy themselves to keep

good looking

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good-looking

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. I

personaly

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personally

think

this

is a negative development since

it

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isit

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costly and sometimes could be

harmfull

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harmful

. The main reason people end up in beauty

clinic

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clinics

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and having

surgery

mostly

because

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that

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they do not feel

confidence

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confident

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with their self.

As a

result

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,result

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they find information and end up in

surgery

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the surgery

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room even

they

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though they

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have to pay

much

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apply

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money.

For instance

,

well known

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well-known

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American actress Madonna is the one who always had

a

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apply

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surgery

because she felt not

confidence

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confident

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in

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on

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stage.

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, she

also

suffer

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with negative

effect

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effects

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of the operation affected to her health even

end

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ending

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in death.

On the other hand

, ordinary people nowadays

also

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are also

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influenced by

this

trend and consume

import

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imported

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cosmetic

product

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products

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, even

go

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going

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overseas to have

operation

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operations

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.

This

is because they want to imitate their favourite actor or actress

in

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on

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TV. Typically they collect all

information

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the information

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and

going to

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apply

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have

same

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the same

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treatment in

exact

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the exact

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place in order to obtain similar

result

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results

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. One real example could be seen from the fans of Korean

actress

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actresses

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,

usually

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,usually

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they go to Korea just to have

the

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apply

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surgery

and buy the cosmetic.

Moreover

, they

also

spend

to

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too

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much money since the price is higher.

To conclude

, lack of

confidence

become

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becomes

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the main reason change their appearance even

they

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if they

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have to pay higher than usual.

In Addition

, having

self

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self-confidence

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confidence

is beneficial to prevent

our selves

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ourselves

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getting

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from getting

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enganged

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engaged

in negative things

such

as

have

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having

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palstic

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plastic

surgery

.