In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future, all types of transportation will be self-driving. Anyway, people will be passengers

while

traveling

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travelling

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inside the

vehicles

. In

this

essay, I will explain why

advantages

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the advantages

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of driverless overshadow the disadvantages.

Firstly

, nowadays electric

vehicles

are becoming more popular than before.

However

, now people are trying to buy an electric vehicle

instead

of normal cars. Because patrols are becoming more

expansive

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expensive

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and

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especially

big

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for big

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vehicles

such

as

,

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buses and trucks.

For example

, my father pays almost 780 a month for his

car

oil. After that, he bought an electric

car

to save that money.

In addition

, electric

vehicles

are saving the environment and population. What I mean

that

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is that

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automatic

vehicles

do not

blow-up

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blow up

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dirty air

such

as normal transportation.

Finally

, driverless

vehicles

are

much

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very

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helpful

it

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they

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can drive

while

person

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a person

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sitting next to

it

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them

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.

For instance

,

while

the

car

is driving by itself.

Consequently

, I can watch a movie or

browsing

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browse

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on

the

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social media,

while

I'm

passenger

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a passenger

the passenger

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. The positive

sides

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side

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, electric

vehicles

could

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can

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travel by

itself

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themselves

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for long

distance

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distances

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. Because traveling far away the vehicle wheels might explode, and

this

makes harmful accented.

For example

, my friend Mike

traveled

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travelled

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from Riyadh to Qatar

on

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in

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electric

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an electric

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car

,

whilst

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and whilst

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the

car

was driving itself the two

backs

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back

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wheels

explode

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exploded

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. Sadly, Mike could not control the

car

, so the

car

was

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crashed into the trees.

Thats

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why electric

vehicles

should be that big of trust. In conclusion, driverless

vehicles

are more beneficial. In my opinion,

this

generation is all about technology developments.

Nonetheless

, automatic

vehicles

become

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come

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with

a

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perfect timing.