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When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a goor thing or bad thing?

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impression
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puts
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huge
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a huge
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 impact on
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's judgemental
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. It is human nature to judge
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 on
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first
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 meeting and give
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 idea about the personality of the
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.
According to
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 my point of view, it is not good to give your reviews on
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's personality by seeing somebody only once. As mentioned before, judging anyone on
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first
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 site is always not beneficial because the
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's behaviour
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 changed
everyday
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according to
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 the occasion, environment and the situations going on in
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's life. So, if we
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 the
person
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 on his worst day, It is not the right time to give
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 statement regarding the personality of
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.
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, in today's world'
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the majority
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 of
people
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suffering
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 from too many responsibilities and conflicts
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 the burden of
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a modern
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 lifestyle. So, we all should have to be careful about the way we treat
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 in
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 life. We cannot like or dislike
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person
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a person
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 as we see them the
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 time.
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, we reflect our own
personlity
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personality
 as well when we make
coversation
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conversation
 with anyone. So,
people
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 treat us as they see our attitude towards them.
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, it is always not
someone
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 else's fault if they
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 you
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a different
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 kind of behaviour. So,
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the
 youth always have to focus on their own attitude as well before judging somebody else. In conclusion,
people
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 must concentrate on their own behaviour
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 judging
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 else.
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, we
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should
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should
 take time before liking or disliking
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 as it is not
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an easy
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 process to rush
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