The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June,

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June,
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The given line graph illustrates
frequency
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the frequency
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of requests in person, by letter or email and by telephone at the UK
tourism association
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Tourism Association
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in the first 6 months
in
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of
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the given year.
Overall
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, it is readily apparent that face-to-face inquiries were the most common in
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period and
overtaking
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telephone
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the telephone
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which
also
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rose.
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, the written data decreased over time. As the graph shows, requests for personal information started at 450 in January, which is the lowest of all three categories and followed by
sharp
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climb until reaching 1600 and 1900 in May and June, respectively. Regarding, there was a steady fall in figures for telephone usage from 900 in January to 800 in February.
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, it grew gradually to 1000 in March and remained unchanged in the following month. Afterwards, the
call up
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inquiries plunged to 1600 in June.
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, requests for letters and
email
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emails
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at a tourist office experienced a decline from 750 in January to 700 in February. After staying constantly
in
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for
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1 month, the figure fell to 650 and 350 in April and May, separately.
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, there was a
leveling
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at 350 in the next 1 month.
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