The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the ratio of
households
who owned or rented accommodation in the UK and Wales Use synonyms
during
1918 to 2011.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, the Linking Words
people
who owned accommodation increased over time with the highest percentage in 2001. Rented properties of cause running in the opposite way in a downward trend with Correct quantifier usage
number of people
also
the lowest proportion in 2001.
In 1918, there is only less than 25% of Linking Words
households
Use synonyms
living
in an owned accommodation which is Wrong verb form
lived
also
the lowest proportion Linking Words
among
the years. The number of Change preposition
in
households
that owned properties Use synonyms
increase
over time and hit Wrong verb form
increased
the
peak in 2001 with around 70% of Correct article usage
a
households
owning their own property. It Use synonyms
goes
down slightly to around 64 Wrong verb form
went
percent
in 2011.
Change the spelling
per cent
In contrast
, people who rented properties are going Linking Words
down slope
during the years. The highest proportion is in 1918 with more than Correct your spelling
downhill
three quarters
of people renting a property Add a hyphen
three-quarters
instead
of owning one. It Linking Words
reaches
its lowest percentage in 2001 with only around 30 Wrong verb form
reached
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
households
renting a property.Use synonyms
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