The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal  between 1967 and 2007
The display graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967
as well as
2007. Carbon dioxide emissions in metric tonnes, in the United Kingdom, in 1967 there
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around 11, in 1977 there were 10, in 1987 there were nearly 10, in 1997 there
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more than 9 and in 2007 there
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9. In Sweden, in 1967 it was more than 8 but later in 1977, it was increased by 10 and in 2007 it was 6. In Italy, in 1967, it was more than 4,
then
later on by 2007 it became 8. In Portugal, in 1967 it was 1 it kept on increasing from 1977 till 6 by 2007. In Portugal and
Italy
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it was increasing.
To conclude
, the above information describes 4 countries the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal. The data is from 1967 to 2007.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • average emissions per person
  • trends
  • reduction
  • increase
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • pivotal years
  • industrial growth
  • policy changes
  • economic changes
  • energy sources
  • technology advancements
  • environmental policies
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