Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads

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budget

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the construction of

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roads

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is important, personally I think that the improvement of

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should not be ignored.

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brings

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huge benefits

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society which impulse many

governments

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around the world to create more train access. One of those advantages is the reduction

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congestion, which

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time to translate

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citizen

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happier and healthier, who could enjoy

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environment cleaner. A good example of

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is the construction of the first Metro in Panama City.

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work brought great advantages for

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, that permitted the

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of more people

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the city and the reduction of traffic congestion in the places where the train has access. Currently, the government of Panama is working in the third line to improve the mobilization of more people in other sites of the city where the jam is a big problem.

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are

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an important need for

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populations and

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governments

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the

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. In those areas where the geographic conditions do not permit the creation of

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, more streets need to be

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.

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, there are

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where the States cannot

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the train zone because of the distances and

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would require huge budgets.

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, a balanced development could create better cities, where many communities could be

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.

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governments

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worldwide should have

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control

between

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the funds created for both

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and

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, in order to have cities eco-friendly and

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satisficed

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and healthier.