The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The table illustrates how many individuals from 5 international territories travelled in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is obvious that the total
number
Use synonyms
of travellers has risen over time.
Moreover
Linking Words
,
while
Linking Words
European residents travelled more than other areas, the Middle East had minor numbers in the given years. Focusing on specific numbers for each continent, Europe residents' international travelling witnessed a sharp growth from 280.2 in 1990 to 390.3 in 1995,
then
Linking Words
it increased steadily to 400.2 in 2005. America's international travel had a moderate climb in the given period from 60.2 in the first to 135.8 in the
last
Linking Words
year,
whereas
Linking Words
the Middle East and Africa faced a marginal rise. The former started from 18.2 in 1990 and inclined to 28.7 in 2005,
while
Linking Words
the latter only grew 6 in these 15 years.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the total
number
Use synonyms
had inclined over time from 1990 to 2005. 448.9 was the reported
number
Use synonyms
in 1990. After a half-decade reached 615.2, and in 2000, 669.2 travellers went for international visiting.
In addition
Linking Words
, the
last
Linking Words
year, 2005, faced 693.7 in the
number
Use synonyms
of people.
Submitted by mahanmxd on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, moreover, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
What to do next:
Look at other essays: