The charts show subway and bus ridership and urban population density in 3 cities in 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting
The table depicts the percentage of bus riders and subway in three major cities in 2009 namely London, New York and
Tokyo
; while
the bar chart delves into their population density per square kilometre. The trend that illustrates London reveals a negative correlation between high-density metropolitan areas and the usage of the metro as opposed to Tokyo
.
In 2009, Tokyo
was the most populated urban area at just below 6000 citizens per square kilometre. One-third of this
city dwellers prefer to use the underground metro in their daily commute Correct determiner usage
these
while
4.4% continue to use buses. This
tendency remains true in New York City despite being a sparsely populated area compared to Tokyo
, with just 2000 persons per square kilometre, 28.6% of them opting to use underground transportation as opposed to 12% using buses.
London saw a negative correlation to this
inclination. Close by and heavily populated as the Japanese capital with 5000 Londoners, this
city relies heavily on buses for their commute with 39.9%; compared to just 19% taking the bus.Submitted by roulaga on
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