The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words. What implications do the indicators have for the countries? You should write at least 150 words.
The display table provides information on social
as well as
economic indicators for 4 nations in the year 1994, according to
United Nations statistics.
Canada
indicators, in annual Replace the word
Canadian
income
per person
in the $US
is 11100, in Add the comma(s)
,US
life
expectancy
at birth
is 76, in daily Add the comma(s)
,birth
calorie
ssupply
per Correct your spelling
supply
person
is 3326 and in adult
literacy
rate
is in
99%. In Japan, Change preposition
apply
annual
Correct article usage
the annual
income
per person
in $US
is 15760, Correct article usage
the US
life
expectancy
at birth
is 78, in daily calorie
supply per person
is 2846 and in adult
literacy
rate
is in
99%. In Peru, Change preposition
apply
annual
Correct article usage
the annual
income
per person
is 160, life
Correct article usage
the life
expectancy
at birth
is 51, in
daily Change preposition
apply
calorie
supply per person
is 1927 and adult
Correct article usage
the adult
literacy
rate
in
68%Correct your spelling
is
. .
In Zaire, in annual Replace the punctuation
.
...
income
per person
is 130, in life
expectancy
at birth
is 47, in daily calorie
is
supply per Unnecessary verb
apply
person
is 1749 and adult
Correct article usage
the adult
literacy
rate
is 34%.
To conclude
, the above data describes indicators of Canada, Japan, Peru as well
as
Zaire in the year 1994.Correct word choice
and
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