employers some times ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevent and useful. others disagree. discuss about these views and give your own opinion.
People are adding personal
information
to applying for jobs and others. They are adding hobbies, interests, and marital status as well. whereas
it is necessary for any further
communication with family but my point of view these have no requirement for the job
, except personal skill and knowledge. This
essay discusses both views for a clear opinion.
Personal information
is not required for any kind of job
application, organizations are seeking well-known person, which have sound skills and well educational background. This
is a fundamental requirement for the job
giver side. some of the time personal information
is required to know about this
person's personality and characteristics. It will be easy for everyone how to deal with the new concern. For example
, if the new job
is unmarried then
it may be possible to take some extra benefits from this
stuff. we can pressure them for long time work and give they outside visit as well. It is required for marketing and sales jobs they have no schedule for performing their requirements.
On the other hand
, this
is totally unnecessary to include personal information
included to the application. Organizations require talented and skilled manpower to develop their work environment and cost-effective products. For that reason, personal information
is not required for this
development, if we get such
type of employees then
they will be dedicated to producing low-cost products and well communicator with all staff. This
affected can not be understood without talented manpower. For instance
, in the garment industry, they produce a lot of cloth every hour, it depends on working efficiency and skill. There is no requirement for any personal information
to do the work and they are making the same cloth as they have gotten measurements from they are supervisor.
In conclusion, to apply for a job
they have not to require personal information
for next they have do
Change the verb form
done
this
job
. If they have skill then
job
application will be okay for this
job
.Submitted by nuresadikchowdhury175 on
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