In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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try
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their products are brand new Correct your spelling
confirm
on
their ads. Change preposition
in
However
, in my opinion
there are both positive and negative effects.
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Firstly
, while
emphasizing the brand on
ads it will Change preposition
in
benefits
a lot of things. I mean when people are thinking Change the verb form
benefit
to buy
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of buying
this
product
, they would be comfortable and
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requesting
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Moreover
, it helps the
businesses to access a huge number of earnings and credibility. Correct article usage
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For instance
, my small bother
saw a doll for sale, with every detail on it. After that, he ordered the doll directly. Correct your spelling
brother
Finally
, advertising any product
it
should be a high-quality video so customers can buy it directly using the business Correct pronoun usage
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product
website.
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On
of
the negative effects there are Change preposition
despite
also
positive situations. Often, a tiny number of business companies put
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use
a
recycled Correct article usage
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product
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products
instead
of brand new
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brand-new
one
. In fact, these kinds of companies are taking Correct pronoun usage
ones
a recycled products
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recycled products
a recycled product
then
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and then
try
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trying
sale
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sell
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them
the
poor people. Correct article usage
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For example
, my grandmother bought a cooker machine from Samsung as a new product
and while
, she arrived home she found that Correct word choice
when
this
product
is
used! Wrong verb form
was
Additionally
, the hand of the machine in
completely not working. In Correct your spelling
is
case
, people Correct determiner usage
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be
aware Wrong verb form
are
from
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of
the
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scams
companies Change the noun form
scam
although
if the company is popular.
To sum up
, ads may have benefits and earns. Furthermore
, it is easier to get all the customers. However
, to avoid scams folks must check the product
before buying and get an invoice to be guide
if something Correct article usage
a guide
would happen
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happens
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