In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is true that businesses
trying
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to
conform
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confirm
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their products are brand new
on
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in
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their ads.
However
, in my
opinion
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there are both positive and negative effects.
Firstly
,
while
emphasizing the brand
on
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in
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ads it will
benefits
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a lot of things. I mean when people are thinking
to buy
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of buying
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this
product
, they would be comfortable
and
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buying it directly without checking or
request
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requesting
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questions
on
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about
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it.
Moreover
, it helps
the
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businesses to access a huge number of earnings and credibility.
For instance
, my small
bother
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brother
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saw a doll for sale, with every detail on it. After that, he ordered the doll directly.
Finally
, advertising any
product
it
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should be a high-quality video so customers can buy it directly using the business
product
website.
In
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the other side,
of
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despite
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the negative effects there are
also
positive situations. Often, a tiny number of business companies
put
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a
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recycled
product
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products
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instead
of
brand new
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brand-new
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one
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ones
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. In fact, these kinds of companies are taking
a recycled products
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recycled products
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then
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and then
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try
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trying
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to
sale
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it
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them
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to
the
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poor people.
For example
, my grandmother bought a cooker machine from Samsung as a new
product
and
while
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, she arrived home she found that
this
product
is
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was
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used!
Additionally
, the hand of the machine
in
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is
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completely not working. In
case
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this case
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, people
be
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are
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aware
from
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of
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the
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scams
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companies
although
if the company is popular.
To sum up
, ads may have benefits and earns.
Furthermore
, it is easier to get all the customers.
However
, to avoid scams folks must check the
product
before buying and get an invoice to be
guide
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a guide
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if something
would happen
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happens
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.
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  • competitive strategy
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