some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protectting culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays, the world is developing considerably and it is undeniable that

culture

, customs , and traditions… are very important and valuable. It is thought by many that

culture

will be deteriorated by proceeds of

tourism

.

However

, others argue that the only way of protecting

culture

is

tourism

.

Although

many individuals think

culture

will become wrecked by profit from

tourism

because of enterprise's unawareness, I agree that

tourism

is one of the best ways to conserve

culture

thanks to the large amount of

money

from

tourism

. On the one hand, the reason why some people consider that

culture

will deteriorate by profit from

tourism

is because of the enterprise’s unawareness. To explain , they believe that the value of

culture

, which is historic ruins and worthless, is being calculated by

money

, and advantage.

Moreover

, they impose national

culture

to advertise and organize tours which attract more visitors and earn big amount of

money

.

For instance

, many tourist attractions misuse customers who have

money

by taking amounts of

money

higher than normal, even some people domineer foreigners because they do not understand when they go abroad.

On the other hand

, the reason why I agree that

culture

ought to be preserved by

tourism

is because of the big

money

from it.

This

is true because many people around the world are very interested in learning about the cultural customs, and traditions of many countries, so

culture

is one of the elements that attract them .

This

leads to many travel agents can earn very much

money

from overseas visitors

as well as

citizens.

As a result

,

this

money

can be invested to improve the conditions of conservation areas, museums…

In addition

, the

culture

and customs of a country will be spread over the world , and the value of

culture

is saved . To summarize, many individuals believe that the value of

culture

will be deteriorated by

tourism

because of the enterprise’s awareness.

Nevertheless

, I personally support the idea that

tourism

is the only way to conserve

culture

as a consequence

of the large amount of payment it earns from business.