You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, say: ● why you need to use this private room ● what you need them to provide for the party ● inquire about the price of the food you are ordering
Hello MR Osama . I hope you are doing very well . I have a party with my family next month , I would like to tell you about it .
Firstly
, My sister has been studying for a long time , Also
she going to graduate in July , Therefore
, I am interested in booking a private room for her . She might invite her friends including our cousins .
Secondly
, My sister loves a special cake , she has experience in a bakery , Therefore
i
would love it if you could help me with that . I want the highest cake which you can make , Change the capitalization
I
Also
, I want fresh fruit on the table. And , I would like to get three pizzas for dinner .
Finally
, I don't mind the cost in other words
i
want to create a special party for my sister . Change the capitalization
I
However
, you ought to tell the cost one week in advance .
Thank you , I am looking forward to hearing back from you .
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coherence cohesion
Try to use connectors to enhance the flow between your ideas.
task achievement
Consider providing a clear and concise explanation for each requirement.
task achievement
You have kept a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for writing to a hotel manager.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph addresses a different point, making your letter well-organized and easy to read.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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