Some people say that a person's success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents. Do you agree or disagree?

It is a matter of contention whether or not the success of an individual is influenced by the upbringing of the
. I completely agree with
To begin
with, home forms the basic unit of
world. A
learns to do a lot of things
as their personal and social interaction from home. They watch and learn how their
relate to each other and to their siblings and begin to adopt the learned behaviour. To affirm
, no wonder there's a saying like father like son. In view of
, if a child gets to become aware of the admirable profession of either parent, he or she may love to make that achievement as an adult.To illustrate
, I have grown to witness all the children of my favorite lecturer Dr Aboah become medical doctors as a way of honouring their father and his passionate and committed attitude toward caring for the sick.
, it is important for
to be made aware of
On the other hand
, some children on the streets who have irresponsible
have very limited dreams and grow up to do something not influential. Others ,
, had big aspirations which were dimmed by their
' challenges in propelling them. Statistics of Ghana have it that the majority of wayward individuals emanated from a lack of proper parenting.
makes it clear that the way a
is raised influences who they become in the future.
To sum up
, I agree with the notion that parental guidance affects who a
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