The diagram below shows the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagram below shows the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
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The diagrams illustrate the different steps and tools used in producing
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and how it is used in the creation of  concrete used for construction.  The
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production is divided into four consecutive stages. Limestone and clay are simultaneously crushed into powder
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directly sent through a mixer for an equal distribution . The mixture is
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exposed to a direct source of heat applied
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of the tunnel of the rotating heater. The heated powder is now ready to be grinded into
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which is stored in bags. 
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is afterwards used in the process of making concrete for the purpose of building. A large vessel is an essential tool in mixing four ingredients to produce concrete. Half of the mix is made of gravel, which are small stones added by their turns to sand,
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and water in these exact percentages respectively 25%, 15% and 10%. The container will rotate continuously to ultimately get the final concrete byproduct.
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