The chart below shows the percentage of boys and girls in one country who played various sports in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of boys’ and girl’s involvement in 6 different sports games in a particular nation in 2010
Overall
, it is apparent that the total percentage of males participating in sports is higher than that of females. Linking Words
Additionally
, it is noteworthy that a huge volume of young men joined football Linking Words
while
the female joiners were interested in netball.
In terms of tennis and basketball, the participants of both genders share the same patterns with an insignificant percentage, about 1%. Linking Words
Such
a gap was even more pronounced in the case of cricket with about 12.5% in comparison with 1% of females. Meanwhile, the disparity between the figures of Linking Words
two
sexes was the most significant in football, with 20% of male attendees, nearly 7 times more than the figure for girls.
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In contrast
, the female attendees showed more passion for swimming and netball. About Linking Words
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15% of females chose swimming to join in, around 3% more than the figures for male counterparts. In the meantime, nearly two out of ten girls were interested in netball, Rephrase
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number of male players choosing Correct word choice
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this
game was insignificant.Linking Words
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