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The line graph indicates the UK acid rain emissions over 17 years

The line graph indicates the UK acid rain emissions over 17 years
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The line graph compares four various sectors in terms of the amount of acid rain emissions from 1990 to 2007 in the UK.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 transport and communication rose significantly over the period given.
In contrast
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,
electricity
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,
gas
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 and
water
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 supply and domestic and other industries registered an enormous decline.
Moreover
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, it is noticeable that transport and communication and
electricity
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,
gas
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 and
water
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 supply showed a similar trend between 2001 and 2003. As can be seen,
electricity
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,
gas
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 and
water
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 supply reached a peak at 3.4
million
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 tonnes in 1990.
Nevertheless
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,
this
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 sector had a mild fluctuation from 1997 to 2001 ranging between 1.4 and 0.9
million
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 approximately. The figures for
electricity
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,
gas
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 and
water
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 supply decreased sharply to 0.5
million
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 in 2007. Domestic and other industries stayed constant at the beginning and end over the period shown.
On the other hand
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, transport and communication increased gradually until it reached a peak at 1
million
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 in 2004.
Likewise
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, it remained constant from 2004 to 2005 and
then
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 dropped dramatically to about 0.7
million
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, gas, water, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emissions
  • acidification
  • sulfur dioxide
  • nitrogen oxides
  • pH level
  • environmental regulations
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • catalytic converters
  • industrial activity
  • green initiatives
  • climate policy
  • air quality
  • sustainable practices
  • emission controls
  • atmospheric deposition
  • long-term trends
  • environmental impact
  • carbon footprint
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