In many countries, imprisonment is the most common solution to crime. However, some people believe that better education will be effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many
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and the
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in making
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To begin
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crime
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environment
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punishment
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unlawful
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prison
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however
imprisonment is really important in many cases to punish some serious crimes. I disagree that only education
is the solution to reduce crime
. Prison
sentence is equally important to eradicate the crime
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