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Most countries spend much money on education as they start to realize the importance of education. In your opinion, which two subjects are the most important for young people and which one is the least important?

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Many countries invest in the educational sector because of its importance. My opinion is,
English
 and
Economics
 are very key subjects but Catering isn't.
To begin
 with, education is the key to success. To implement education, teachers, teaching institutions , writing surfaces and various electronic devices are all required to do so. To achieve
this
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intensive
 as the teachers need to be paid.
Hence
 it is logical
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some
 national authorities are investing in
this
 field. There are several important reasons for educating the citizens of a society. There are multiple subjects, the significant ones there are include
English
 and
Economics
.
English
 is the first
laguage
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language
 of most countries around the globe. Now that the world has become a global village, it may become necessary for people from different walks of life to work or school together whilst connecting over the internet. It makes it easier if every member of
such
 groups speaks the same language.
Therefore
, it is understandable why learning to speak and write in
English
 should be a foundation
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 every school.
Economics
,
on the other hand
, involves fund management. Every nation needs to execute projects for it's
developments
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.
Such
 tasks
requires
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 money to materialise. It is imperative for
law makers
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 to have knowledge
on
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 how to utilise money so as to apportion
nation's
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the nation's
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 funds appropriately. Running a country without
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 on how to spend the money will be disastrous. From
this
, it is clear
economics
 should be a mandatory course to be taught. Catering as a school subject
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 need not be part of the academic curriculum. It is
an
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 art of cooking. From childhood, we all observe our mothers cook. Females are even involved in meal preparation. Though a form of informal teaching, the kids still pick up the skills and are able to use
it
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 in adulthood. I will say anyone who needs additional cooking skills can pay to study more from experts.
Moreover
, life has become busy and people even find it difficult to make time to cook.
To conclude
, I do not think it is necessary for
this
 subject to be a part of the routine curriculum of our academic facilities.
To sum up
, I completely agree with the fact that education is important
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 government should
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 attention to it. It is
however
 undoubted that some teaching programs are more necessary than others.
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