The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Write a summery with 150 words
The given bar chart illustrates the
number
of car trips that entered to
the town centre made by inhabitants and non-inhabitants.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
,it is clear that
,during the first four years
,Correct article usage
the highest
highest
Correct article usage
the highest
number
of trips made
by people who live in the city and after the parking meters had Add a missing verb
was made
introdused
the trend became inverse till 2002.Correct your spelling
introduced
while
Change preposition
in the
the
Change preposition
in the
last
three years
Correct article usage
the figures
figures
Correct article usage
the figures
Change preposition
for
of
both Change preposition
for
categorry
reduced Correct your spelling
category
categories
Change preposition
in drastically
drastically
compared to previous Change preposition
in drastically
years
.
To begin
with,The average number
of journeys made by the community were
between 9000 Change the verb form
was
to
10000 during the first 4 Correct word choice
and
years
,while
the figures of
outsiders in 1996 ,Change preposition
for
about
5000 and increased slightly to just above 8000 in 1999.
Add a missing verb
were about
Further more
,When parking meters Correct your spelling
Furthermore
had
introduced in 2000,It Verb problem
were
is
Wrong verb form
was
noticeble
that the amount of Correct your spelling
noticeable
citizens
cars Change noun form
citizens'
citizen's
reduced
to under 5000 Add a missing verb
was reduced
whereas
the non-citizens figures remained approximately in
the same amount (8000) until the Change preposition
apply
westgate
street Change the capitalization
Westgate
and
park lane closed to traffic Correct word choice
apply
in
the end of 2002.In the Change the preposition
at
last
three years
number
of motir
vehicles stayed Correct your spelling
motor
bellow
4000 except the average count of trips made by non-residents in 2005 went up to just below 5000.Correct your spelling
below
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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