With the rise of e-books, come the decline in paper books . Some people see this ad a good forward step while others do not. What are advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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to use
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some
people
support
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the usage
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of
e-
books
, others do not.
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and drawbacks of
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in
usage
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the usage
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of
e-
books
instead
of paper
books
. Reading something from
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an e-book
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has two main advantages.
Firstly
,
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these devices
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enviromentally
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environmentally
friendly and
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carbon
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the carbon
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footprints of
people
.
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normal
books
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to
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from
papers
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that
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to
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de-forestration,
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by
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more renewable resources like plastic and glass which
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environment
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.
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, it
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reading
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habitat of
people
because they can carry
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easily to wherever they want and download various
books
in seconds.
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,
e-
books
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harmfull
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harmful
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eyes
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health. Spending more than 30 minutes
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close
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a close
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distance with artificial light,
espacially
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especially
blue light, cause
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hypermetroph
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hypertrophy
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long-term
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.
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, our
brain
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do not adapt
itself
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for
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extract knowledge from screens. From primary school, we
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to learn things using paper-based materials like
books
and
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dictionaries
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.
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researches
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that when
people
try to learn new
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pieces of knowledge
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from
electoronic
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electronic
devices, they tend to forget things more and feel hard to memorise things from
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the study
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. In conclusion,
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in
e-
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books
usage
for instance
to
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books
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books
have
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positive
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impact
to
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nature and
increase
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increases
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reading habits
with
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being reacheble.
However
,
also
it has some negative effects
to
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health and cognitive functions.
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