The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the visitors Linking Words
number
in a selected Caribbean island from 2016 to 2017.
Here, The Use synonyms
number
of travellers Use synonyms
stayed
on cruise ships witnessed a gradual rise with a slight decline where the tourists Correct pronoun usage
who stayed
stayed
on Correct pronoun usage
who stayed
island
fluctuated and rose Correct article usage
the island
subsequently
Linking Words
later
. The total Rephrase
apply
number
didn't fall ever and showed a continuous rise with sharp growth later.
The Use synonyms
number
of visitors on cruise ships was about 25000 in 2010 and faced a slight increase next year and became 50,000. Use synonyms
Following
year with a slight Correct article usage
The following
decrease
It stood Add a comma
,decrease
same
as Correct article usage
the same
2011
and started growing gradually. It never fell down lately and stood at 2 Change preposition
in 2011
Use synonyms
millions
in in 2017. Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
number
of travellers Use synonyms
stayed
on Wrong verb form
staying
island
Correct article usage
the island
waa
Correct your spelling
was
near
Change the word
nearly
to
75000 in 2010 and started rising after 2011 to 2013 and became 1.5 Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
millions
. Change to singular
million
Afterward
, It was increased a bit and was fixed at 1.5 Change the spelling
Afterwards
Use synonyms
millions
same as from 2013 to 2016.
The total Change to singular
million
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
treavellers
Correct your spelling
travellers
was
always upward. From 2010 It started growing and Change the verb form
were
became
Verb problem
apply
double
Replace the word
doubled
at
just 3 years in 2013. I Change preposition
in
was
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
just
under 3 Change preposition
by just
Use synonyms
millions
in 2015 and remained the same Change to singular
million
to
2016. It soared in 2017 and stood at 3.5 Change preposition
in
Use synonyms
millions
.Change to singular
million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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