Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
It is said that schools should select
students
according to
their academic abilities
. However
, others believe that it is better to have students
with different abilities
studying together. In this
essay, both views will be discussed before giving my opinion.
On one hand, It is reasonable why the idea that schools should select students
according to
their academic abilities
. The first reason is that there students
can help each other to solve the hard problems or exercises because they have the same forte. They can communicate easy
Change the adjective
easily
to
each other. The second reason is it will be much Change preposition
with
more
easier to nominate Change the word
apply
teacher
to teach them. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
For example
, a group of students
that good
at maths can be taught by a professor of mathematics, so that they can Add a missing verb
are good
increased
their knowledge a lot in maths.
It is understandable why the idea that it is better to have Change the verb form
increase
students
with different abilities
studying together is justifiable. Firstly
, when there is a group of students
with different abilities
studying together, they can help each other by teach to
each one their Wrong verb form
teaching
abilities
. With that fact, students
in this
group will be able to have the results that are good at every subjects
. Change to a singular noun
subject
Second,
the fee for highly
classes is always higher than the classic classes. That means it is cheaper to put all the Replace the word
higher
students
with different abilities
studying together. A survey has shown that the money people have to pay for their children to learn in a highly
class Change the word
high
tend
to Change the verb form
tends
higher
than a classic class by 10% to 20%.
In conclusion, I hold the same view that schools should select Add a missing verb
be higher
students
according to
their academic abilities
and it is better to have students
with different abilities
studying together for the number of reasons mentioned above.Submitted by Soobinsj13
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Improve topic relevance and stay focused on the main points.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words and clear paragraph structure to improve overall coherence and cohesion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite