Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

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It is said that schools should select
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their academic
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, others believe that it is better to have
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with different
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studying together. In
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essay, both views will be discussed before giving my opinion. On one hand, It is reasonable why the idea that schools should select
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their academic
abilities
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. The first reason is that there
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can help each other to solve the hard problems or exercises because they have the same forte. They can communicate
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each other. The second reason is it will be much
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easier to nominate
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to teach them.
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, a group of
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that
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at maths can be taught by a professor of mathematics, so that they can
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their knowledge a lot in maths. It is understandable why the idea that it is better to have
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with different
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studying together is justifiable.
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, when there is a group of
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with different
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studying together, they can help each other by
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each one their
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. With that fact,
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in
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group will be able to have the results that are good at every
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the fee for
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classes is always higher than the classic classes. That means it is cheaper to put all the
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with different
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studying together. A survey has shown that the money people have to pay for their children to learn in a
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class
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than a classic class by 10% to 20%. In conclusion, I hold the same view that schools should select
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according to
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their academic
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and it is better to have
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with different
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studying together for the number of reasons mentioned above.
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Improve topic relevance and stay focused on the main points.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words and clear paragraph structure to improve overall coherence and cohesion.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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