The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information abouth the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The given line chart illustrates the details concerning the rate of living in the city for four Asian nations between 1970 and 2020,
as well as
the prediction of the next 20 years. Generally, it could be obviously witnessed that all of the countries had a positive growth in
this
duration, and they're predicted to continuously climb in the next two decades. What's more, Malaysia had the most dramatic growth rate in 50 years. Looking into the data with more details, the Philippines had the highest rate of population living in the city with 31%. and arrived at its peak in 1990 with about 48%
then
declined from 1990 to 2010, and
finally
reversed to increase its percentage to 45% in 2020 and the prediction is going to increase to over 50% in 2040.
Furthermore
, Malaysia grew dramatically, it was 30% in 1970.
However
, after soaring in 50 years , it became the country where most people lived in the city with over 70%. Thailand and Indonesia
also
greatly grew in the duration, Thailand was from 18% to 25% and is going to be 42% in the prediction of 2040.
On the other hand
,Indonesia was
initially
13% in 1970 and became 50% in 2020,
while
it is predicted that there will be a persistently upward trajectory to 55% in 2040.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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