A friend has invited you to a party but you will not be able to attend. Write to your friend. In your letter •Tell your friend you can’t come •Explain why you are unable to attend •Arrange another time to meet

Dear Aman, I hope

this

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letter finds you well.

Firstly

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, I wanted to say thanks for the invitation to your

birthday

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next weekend, and I love to be there but I will not be able to come

due to

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my exams because my exam will start on Monday

as well as

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it can take more than two week so it is impossible for to join your

birthday

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party.

Moreover

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, As you know my behaviour is that I am really fascinated about my exam or grade and I wanna get the highest grade

this

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semester

that is

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why I am trying to give extra time to every module

eventhough

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even though

I burn

midnight

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oil.

However

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, I would like to meet you after the exams.

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, if I get a good grade in

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sem we will go outside for the outing. Once again, I feel sorry for not attending your

birthday

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celebration

while

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wishing you a happy

birthday

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and enjoying your special day with your family and loved ones. Hope you have a wonderful

birthday

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. Best wishes, Dalbir Kaur

dalbir_kaurWed Jun 04 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to break your ideas into clearer, separate paragraphs for better flow.

Task Achievement

Try to explain your feelings or reasons a bit more clearly. This helps in showing your task response is fully understood.

Task Achievement

You showed a good personal touch by expressing your feelings about missing the party.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter had a nice greeting and closing, which makes it warm and friendly.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

178 words

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