The graph shows the number of girls and boys playing sport in an English town in 2012
The bar chart presents information about
boys
and Change noun form
boys'
boy's
girls
preferences in playing six types of Change noun form
girls'
girl's
sport
activities in a British town in 2012. The main fact that stands out is that the Change the noun form
sports
most
favourite Correct quantifier usage
apply
sport
for boys
was football while
for girls
it was swimming.
Two types of sport
attracted a bigger number of males, 60 boys
played football and 50 tennis. While the
least interesting Correct word choice
The
sport
was hockey, which was chosen by 15 children only. Badminton, cycling and swimming was
selected by a somewhat equal number of Change the verb form
were
boys
which was between 30 and 40.
On the other hand
, the highest number of girls
, 50 people, chose swimming as their main sport
activity. Tennis and badminton were selected by almost
equal amount of Add an article
an almost
girls
, 38 and 40 respectively. 20 girls
only were interested in cycling and football and hockey was the least interesting type of sport
, hence
only 9 girls
were playing it.Submitted by roulaga on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls, sport with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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