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The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019.

The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019.
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 the data of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019. The 5 countries are
Australia
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,
Germany
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,
United
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the United
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States
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,
Japan
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 and
United
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the United
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Kingdom
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. There are 5 nations they are
Australia
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,
Germany
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, the United
State
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States
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,
Japan
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 and
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United
Kingdom
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. from the year 2019 and it
given
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 in US dollars. In
Australia
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, there was $5187. In
Germany
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, there was $6646 more than three nations. In the United
States
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, there was the
hidgest
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onther
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other
 nations with $11073. In
Japan
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, there was $4823. In the United
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Kingdom
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 there was $4652.
Japan
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as well as
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 United
Kingdom
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is
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 almost equal to each other. There is
great
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different
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 between every nation. The highest difference is in the United
States
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 and the United
Kingdom
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.
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, the above information
descibes
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describes
 health expenditure per capita in
Australia
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,
Germany
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, the United
States
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,
Japan
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 and the United
Kingdom
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. The information is in US dollars in the year 2019.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, germany, states, japan, kingdom with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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