The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. #development #village #ryemouth

The map illustrates changes in the village of Ryemouth from 1995 to the present day.

Overall

, the place witnessed dramatic changes over the period. The housing has been extended to cover a larger area with a new golf course and tennis courts built in the village.

However

, the fish port and the shops were demolished and replaced.

Firstly

, new houses were built not only in the housing area located in the western part of the village but

also

in the south where the fish market has been demolished to accommodate more apartments. A fishing port was present in 1995 at the sea coast which was

also

removed. Shops located to the north of the fish market were replaced by a restaurant in the present day.

Secondly

, the eastern part of the place was completely redeveloped. Former farmlands and forests were cut down and replaced with a golf course and a tennis court.

Furthermore

, the hotel located to the south of the sports complex was

also

renovated to include a parking space.

However

, the cafe present near the sea coast remains unchanged during the period.

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Urban development
Infrastructure
Residential area
Commercial district
Public amenities
Greenery
Renovation
Expansion
Demolition
Construction
Accessibility
Public transport
Urbanization
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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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