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Good evening, my name is Nga. I am from Thai Binh. Currently, I am a student at

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university

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University

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social sciences

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Social Sciences

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and

humanities

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Humanities

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. I think that I am a

hard- working

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student.

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studying at school, I

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work part-time to gain more job experience before graduating. My strengths are organized and creative. But I am

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unselfconscious person I have a hobby of listening to English music and reading

book

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books

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Sometime

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, I play badminton at the weekend. My family has 5 people: my parents, my sister, me and my younger brother.

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what I would like to talk about myself. Thanks for reading!

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Sep 24, 2023

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

106 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

bilingual
multilingual
fluency
communicate
cognitive skills
cultural awareness
opportunities
globalized world
job market
interact
linguistic abilities
cultural exchange
language proficiency
language barrier
foreign travel
personal growth
academic achievement
self-confidence
enhance
cross-cultural communication

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write a letter to you

The Greeting

Some people think that the news channels and media nowadays have sensationalised and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that it is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Modern technology has made it possible for people to view exhibitions at home, so museum and art galleries will disappear soon. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is that? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?

Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

Some people do not eat meat and fish. They think that it will better for health and also world. Discuss the the view and give you opinion.