the graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 by four different modes of transport

The line graph presents how many

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started and stopped working in a country from 2011 to 2018.

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, the

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of

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closed and opened in the given period changed dramatically and

this

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was lower in 2018 compared to

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2011.

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, there were about 8,500 new

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in 2011, roughly 2000 more than those closed in the same year. In the following year, the proportion of shop openings dropped rapidly to fewer than half the

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in 2011 but soon resurged during the next two years to over 6,000 in 2014. Over the same time, the figure for shop closures showed some fluctuation and remained at about 6,500 till 2014, a few more than the new

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. From 2015 onward, there was a wild fluctuation in the quantity of

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stopping their business

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the figure for the new startups witnessed a downward trend. The

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of new

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reduced to 4000 in 2015, remaining unchanged over the next two years before another fall of about 1000 in 2018. Meanwhile, the statistics for those closed dropped wildly in 2015 to just about 500

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but rose back to over 5000 in 2016, overtaking the new

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and keeping stable till the end. 2015 witnessed a sudden dive in the quantities of

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stopping their business to about 500

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. In the same year, the

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of new start-ups

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reduced, falling back to 4,000

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, which stayed stable till 2017 before another slight fall in 2018 to 3000

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.

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, there was a wild growth in the

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of closed

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in 2016, reaching over 5,000

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, surpassing the

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of newly opened and remained unchanged to the end of the course.