This is a part of a letter your receive from an English pen friend. Don't forget to tell me about the area you live in and what you and your friends do in your free time. Write a letter to your pen friend. Write your letter in about 100 words.

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Dear Mercy Nguyen I am writing to provide you with the area where I live and what my friends do in our free time. I live in Vung Tau city. There are many good things about living here. The first is the beautiful parks and sandy beaches, and the weather here is sunny year-round.

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, it is very suitable for outdoor activities.

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the traffic here is great because the streets are very spacious and the people are very obedient to the traffic laws.

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, the people living here are

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very friendly and kind. You can easily make friends with them and will easily get help when something goes wrong. In my free time, my friends and I often go shopping or go to the movie theatre.

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, we are going to the Vung Tau beach where we can comfortably swim. I am very happy

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we are playing together. I look forward to receiving your information. Yours sincerely, Phuong Uyen

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

162 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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