The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The chart below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.
The chart gives information about how many trips were made by children to and from the school in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the most popular type of transport in 2010 was an automobile,
while
in 1990 pupils preferred to walk. Turning to the details, In 1990, the great majority of people used to walk rather than travel by car, bike or other type of vehicle. Bus transportation gained the second place of favorability,
whereas
cycling with 6 million trips came in 3rd place. It is obvious that in 2010
this
trend changed and students started to use automobiles with almost 11 million
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per year. In comparison, walking had only half of that popularity with 6 million respectively. The usage of the bus gained third place, which shows a downward trend. So, the trips by car showed the opposite situation, as the number of passengers has been growing steadily.
Although
walking was the most popular in 1990, by 2010, it had become less popular compared to other types of transport.
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