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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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studying abroad rise relatively in university
students
 like a part of their
students
, advantage, they see another culture and motivation,and their communication with the people.
Although
, they don't have a friend or a family. In my opinion, studying in a new
country
 is far better.
Although
,despite the challenges that they will inevitably face. On one hand, studying in a new
country
 can take your hand to get tough knowledge about new transitional.
Also
, you will have a lot of experience rewarding you in the future, being in another
country
 requires people to push themselves above and beyond the norm into unusually difficult experiences,
for example
, I wrote in the book to
Dr.
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Ahmed when he was in the UK. They see "When I got to the UK I learned How can I solve my problems so that pushed me out of my comfort zone and went through psychology states that we are unique and novel and that I had to adapt no matter what.
this
 ultra challenging experiences are paradoxical the main advantage of studying overseas, is that
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this
 makes you grow as a person.
On the other hand
, the main challenge that
students
 will face is a kind of depression, because they don't have family or old friends.
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for those who apply basically care for their family.
Also
, the requirement of life and the brochure without anyone's support or help if you get in trouble.
for instance
, when I wrote about the book, Dr.Ahmed mentioned, that he was close to her mother, so he had a difficult time
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mingling and adapting with people in his area.
However
,
this
 new experience could affect your emotion and makes you lonely. In conclusion, many university
students
 prefer to study in a new
country
,
while
students
 will no doubt be lonely because they are far from their loved ones, but the main advantage to studying overseas is to become a grown person and understand the culture. I strongly believe that experience you can't forget all your life.
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